[Discussion]Chex Squadron, the Role Play

[Zorchdude]

ZORCH RIFT! ZORCH RIFT! WARNING! ZORCH RIFT!

A Zorch Rift is a tear in Time and Space. Fatal unlike ordinary Zorch. It's a bit like a 2 dimensional black hole. It looks like Xplfnt described it in the topic. A Zorch hole is not dissimilar, but it is much less intensified and therefore non-fatal. It also does not suck things towards it, unlike a Zorch Rift. A Zorch Rift is caused by an item filled with Liquid Zorch being Zorched, creating a never-ending loop and possibly destroying everything.

The whole ship rests in Albert's hands. WILL HE CATCH THE CRATE? OR WILL HE DIE HORRIBLY? I can guess.

[Replica]

Come on guys! We really need to read peoples post beofre posting.

Manny gave an example.

Another would be that Peter and Molly were ate the strip, and yet we then jump back in time so Kuwabara and Allen characters can join them...? The only other one can be fixed... I'll do that easily.

I'm not sure how to fix that problem though, maybe if Arch edits his post to include Allen and Kuwabara's characters?

[Strife]

Until that's cleared up, Replica, I didn't mention the names of any of the group members in my latest post other than Molly. Once we've figured out how to fix it, I can put them in for clarification.

[Kuwabara]

Come on guys! We really need to read peoples post beofre posting.

I'm sorry, but that is a LOT of reading to do!  I made sure to skim it though.

[Strife]

Come on guys! We really need to read peoples post beofre posting.

I'm sorry, but that is a LOT of reading to do!  I made sure to skim it though.

I can see Kuwa's reasoning behind this. The RP is moving very fast, and naturally this might cause some details to be lost. The only thing I can really suggest is that at the end of each post, maybe we can type a quick summary of the characters mentioned in the post so that people who are just skimming through will know which posts relate to the characters they are controlling.

For example, if I typed a post where Molly was talking to Peter and ran into Frost at the landing strip, I could just type something like "Molly, Peter, Frost - Landing Strip on Floor C" at the end of my post. That way, the person who is controlling Frost, if they happen to just be skimming through the topic, will spot their character's name and know that they should go back and read through it. In addition, anyone who has a character in the Landing Strip will notice the location name and will also know that they should read through the post in case their character overheard or saw the events taking place.

[Zorchdude]

Save Albert! He's got a Zorch Rift on his hands! Someone help him!

[Manny Cav]

Buff is station in the Central Room, protecting stuff. Can Albert not save himself?

[ChexCommander]

There's 3 Commanders.

1.) Frost. - CC's charactor - yeah, he passed out after his ship crashed.
2.) Unkown name - Manny made him, he was good in the vent though.
3.) Milk - My Charactor. He's currently on his way to help Commander Frost.

Wow, we're really getting into this.. or at least I am.

I'm getting into this too.

Rep, I don't think Manny's Buff Wheatman is a Commander. He's a rookie for now.

And yes, Frost is unconscious.

And we must take the time to at least quickly read each other's posts or else the whole story will crash and burn. At first, I didn't even realize Milk was a Commander too until I reread it.

[Replica]

There's 3 Commanders.

1.) Frost. - CC's charactor - yeah, he passed out after his ship crashed.
2.) Unkown name - Manny made him, he was good in the vent though.
3.) Milk - My Charactor. He's currently on his way to help Commander Frost.

Wow, we're really getting into this.. or at least I am.

I'm getting into this too.

Rep, I don't think Manny's Buff Wheatman is a Commander. He's a rookie for now.

And yes, Frost is unconscious.

And we must take the time to at least quickly read each other's posts or else the whole story will crash and burn. At first, I didn't even realize Milk was a Commander too until I reread it.

No, no, the Cammander Wheatman was with in the air vents.

[arch129]

I don't mean to sound discouraging, but it seems like the flemoid plot is making this story way to complicated.
The issue in the ICOF Spaceship was meant to start the adventure out easy but now its driving away from that plot.

I think we should use this topic to our advantage so we can keep this story organized and plan out big plot changes.

ZORCH RIFT! ZORCH RIFT! WARNING! ZORCH RIFT!

A Zorch Rift is a tear in Time and Space. Fatal unlike ordinary Zorch. It's a bit like a 2 dimensional black hole. It looks like Xplfnt described it in the topic. A Zorch hole is not dissimilar, but it is much less intensified and therefore non-fatal. It also does not suck things towards it, unlike a Zorch Rift. A Zorch Rift is caused by an item filled with Liquid Zorch being Zorched, creating a never-ending loop and possibly destroying everything.

The whole ship rests in Albert's hands. WILL HE CATCH THE CRATE? OR WILL HE DIE HORRIBLY? I can guess.

Again I don't mean to sound discouraging, but this is to big of a plot change for one person to throw out there IMO. We should discuss ideas for plot changes that will affect everybody, if the story changes too much too fast people won't like it.

[Manny Cav]

I thought the Flemoid attack was the plot.

[ChexCommander]

I thought we had two sides going: one aboard the IFOC ship, and one in the Flem World. Slime was beginning to make it so that the two came together.

ZORCH RIFT! ZORCH RIFT! WARNING! ZORCH RIFT!

A Zorch Rift is a tear in Time and Space. Fatal unlike ordinary Zorch. It's a bit like a 2 dimensional black hole. It looks like Xplfnt described it in the topic. A Zorch hole is not dissimilar, but it is much less intensified and therefore non-fatal. It also does not suck things towards it, unlike a Zorch Rift. A Zorch Rift is caused by an item filled with Liquid Zorch being Zorched, creating a never-ending loop and possibly destroying everything.

The whole ship rests in Albert's hands. WILL HE CATCH THE CRATE? OR WILL HE DIE HORRIBLY? I can guess.

But THAT is distracting and confusing. Anything even close to a rift is a bit complex this early on with everything already happening. It's just being thrown into the gears.

[arch129]

The setting I am suggesting in this case would be the Intergalactic Federation of Cereals' Chex Squadron Headquarters.  To begin, we would likely be more dealing with training and character development (basically conversation, interacting with his environment), but later we can come up with a situation to send the characters into, flemoid related or not.  Even perhaps have a few issues in the Federation not having to do with the flemoids to warm up, then have some sort of flemoid issue.  Failing that, we could even do it without any flemoids if we come up with storylines that work well enough. 

To my understanding this mission on the ICOF Spaceship was to be some kinda practice for use to get used to this kinda Role Playing format. I was thinking the ICOF spaceship part would be a short battle between some flemoids, then after that the main charters could go to some kinda planet like what happens in the Chex Quest games there being a larger battle.

I just believe that from the flemoids respective a big battle is going to happen way too soon in the story.

[ChexCommander]

Nah, I'm liking this adventure on the ship. It was to be an introductory opening, yes, but it can still be intricate. I'm tired of having the same stuff happen every time, y'know?

[The Slimeinator]

Replica's post... it... conflicts...