So I'm planning a new mod, and here's a little intro I just wrote. Tell me what you think and what could be improved.
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Sitting at his desk in his house, Ted Chexxer thought hard about what to write in his latest book, When Cereal Laughs. Suddenly, his phone rang, and he picked it up.
"This is the IFC Army Reserve. All Reserve units have been activated to subdue a Flemoid invasion that is currently in progress. Meet up with your squad at the IFC Army Reserve Base just outside of Chex City. Be careful, as Flemoids are streaming around the ci..."
The line went dead, and Ted quickly grabbed his mini zorcher out of the desk drawer and went to his front door.
More city-flemoid zorching madness! Wee!
Sounds like the start to a great mod!